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Listen To The Rain

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Listen to the rain
Let it sooth away your pain
As it washes away
The dirt of today

You took my breath away
By bringing down the rain
I never will forget
The sound of the rain

Listen to the rain
Let it wash away your pain
As mother nature calls your name
She knows you will be whole again

I took your hand in mine
As we walked in the rain
Never will I forget
The beauty of that day

Listen to the rain
As is slowly fades away
Leaving everything covered
In tiny drops of water

Watch as the sun comes up
And those tiny drops of water
Slowly turn to diamonds
Sparkling in the light of a new day
Ok so I fell a sleep listening to the rain and ended up having a really weird dream. This is the by product to that dream. I know that it is a little weird but this is how I saw it in my mind. Any comments on what I could do to make this better would be welcome because I'm not sure that it is actually finished.

*note: the display pic is in no way mine. I found it doing a random search on the internet and felt that I went with the song.*
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Verganglichkeit's avatar
personally, i like it just the way it is. its a lot different than your previous works but it i think i like it the most. it flows well and the visual is intense. its beautiful. thank you for sharing it! love you!